Ever since your Latios picture, I've noticed a very huge improvement in your coloring style. Shadow values are becoming more believable, and thereby makes your overall composition a lot more pleasing to the eyes. Brown and orange are especially two colors that you can easily have fun with, and I have to say you're headed in the right direction with your illustrations.

The concept itself sure is an interesting one I have never seen before. Awkward indeed! That's no way to leave a good first impression, now, is it? The look of surprise in each charcaters face portrays each emotion right...surprise, confusion, and a mere "uh-oh" just made the moment!

The critique I have to offer is minor, really, since errors aren't as noticeable as they once were. The background despite the interesting characters in the back, could have something that could fit the scene. Maybe a barn or painting room or forest. Anything, really, that could make the sky more interesting. The anatomy of the mother's legs could also use some variation they aren't just ordinary legs, and the construction of her head seems to circle-ish. I'd probably look at different head angles for reference. I definitely enjoyed the colors, no doubt about that, only thing I could suggest there is to make the shadows and highlights slightly stronger, making the colors appear less "washed out." (Not sure if you have Photoshop, but a quick fiddle with the Levels usually fixes this.)

Sorry I haven't commented around lately, but you're definitely showing fast improvements. I'm really pleased. Keep at it; I'm eager to see more.

Haha so cute^^

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Thank you SO MUCH Bungie! I know I can count on you for constructive crits!! I definatly will work on those things...haha..I didn't even notice how bland the background was or the anatomy of the moms head either XD I gave up on the legs though (which I regret) and just had them as those...straight legged..."chibi" legs that look like pegs, lawl XDD

Anyways, thank you so much Bunnggiiieee!!! It's fine that your comments are slowed down, any comment from you is greatly appreciated

Beautifully colored! Very cute style.

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Oh I get it! Very cute idea and great job with the cloors!

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explane to me?

You see... the mother or the adult (however you want to put it) Eevee up there has a job of painting the easter eggs. Supposedly, someone mistook an real egg for a fake one, so when the adult tried to paint it, the baby eevee hatched out if it.

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Cute!

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